Monday, April 20, 2009

Acknowledgments


Some years have passed since I last looked at the facsimile copy of the 1798 first edition of Lyrical Ballads. I recall its elegant and austere physical presence though: lots of white space on the pages, text neatly centered above the page numbers, the words almost floating from the page to the eye. A title announces itself with little fuss, and, oddly, no author’s name appears. I think the name of the press and the year are printed—and that’s it regarding acknowledgments.

In the second edition, published in 1800 (or 1802?--my books are packed away for now), Wordsworth is credited as the author (though Coleridge wrote several pieces, too), and the famous Preface adds contextual density. These two different versions of Lyrical Ballads have always inspired my curiosity because of the tension that evolved in Wordsworth and Coleridge during those intervening years between the first and second editions. The anonymous 1798 version presents itself with raw freshness and separation: it makes a dramatic break with the past and announces a new vision in the work of anonymous authors. A reader that year (there were few), if they did not know the writers, would encounter a lovely and inviting book, and yet it was accompanied without the legitimizing apparatus of names, associations, or relationships beyond the poems therein.

By 1800, Wordsworth acts to legitimize the claims his poetry has made by providing a contextual statement that announces a new poetics. A very different book arrives, then, in readers’ hands. A name locates the writing with an individual, while the preface argues for a new methodology of a poetics that is rooted in the experience of that individual, and in his ability to relate it in words. By the time Wordsworth died in 1850, he was practically an institution of England.

I have been compelled by the young work of Coleridge and Wordsworth because of its radical sense of departure from convention toward the exploration of their appetites of knowledge and vision that accompany their radical invention in language. I like thinking of them through Dorothy Wordsworth’s journals, walking between Stowey and Alfoxden (if I have those details right), observing the landscape, getting caught in the rain, loafing in fields. The more staid and stately versions of themselves they aimed for later in life—once the terror of the French Revolution was at hand—is depressing. Wordsworth embraces the machinery of legitimation, stiffening his upper lip on his way to the Lake District while Coleridge gulps opium, abandons a family, ships out, only to return, weirdly institutionalized himself as the grand old patriarch of British letters, despite his kooky addiction and airs. And yet, something wild arises in his writing even late, and I like to think of his invisible presence in the early editions of Lyrical Ballads.

I bring this up because I posted a knee-jerk reaction recently to Jason Guriel’s post over at Harriet, the details of which are recorded in the comments section there. His words rubbed me the wrong way, I think, because of this tension between anonymity and legitimacy, and the contextual realization of the poem along that A-L axis. I like to think that poems should provide all a reader’s needs. They persuade us by their particular textures and concerns, and by poetry's ability to influence our belief and desires.

But I know this is bullshit, too. The first thing I do with a new book is read the blurbs, the name of the press, year and city of publication, author bio, and, of course, the acknowledgments page. This provides rhetorical texture and context that I can’t help but want. I do think that this apparatus serves a number of functions based on the needs for legitimacy and the ambitions of the author and publisher. I like the way some authors, however, contextualize their own sense of community rather than annotating their publication history in a long list of important presses, etc, and I find the awards aspect of things to interfere with this sense of community I’m talking about.

An example of a kind of acknowledgments page that I find particularly useful can be found in Rodrigo Toscano’s new book, Collapsible Poetics Theater. This was a National Poetry Series winning book from 2007, only recently published, but what I find compelling is, in addition to the usual list of magazines where individual poems appeared (Ecopoetics, Jubilat, Cross Cultural Poetics (XCP), etc), Toscano provides a list of names of people for whom “Collapsible Poetics Theater would not be possible,” including Tom Orange, John Beer, Leonard Schwartz, Kristin Prevallet, and probably one hundred others. Adding to this list, Toscano extends gratitude to his co-workers at the Labor Institute, adding yet anther contextual layer through which to read his book. While I think we could argue over how this influences the reading of his work, Toscano follows an impulse that he shares with Wordsworth—to want to help direct readers through his writing by outlining a community of writers and activists who share affinities with his project. And yet I wonder, too, what the experience of reading this book would be like without the apparatus that legitimizes, not Toscano’s career, but his ambition, concerns, and drives as a poet?

Anyway, I should acknowledge my thanks to Jason for bringing this up--so thanks!

7 comments:

Don Share said...

Great and useful post, Dale! Thank you for this. The Toscano is an interesting and apt case study, and you've put all this very well.

Sorry I've fallen out of touch - been very ill - but will write soon.

With much gratitude,

Don

tmorange said...

hi dale,

to my knowledge many people listed in toscano's acknowledgments have performed in and/or hosted CPT pieces around the country over the past, say, six years or so. his work represented in the book, and even the individual pieces themselves, have developed quite a bit in and through their successive performed reiterations. and so his acknowledgments are not merely "outlining a community of writers and activists who share affinities with his project" as you say -- it's literally the people who have helped embody the work in its successive instantiations.

and so i wonder about the experience of reading this book for people who have never seen or performed in the pieces over the past six years...

allbests,
tom

Dale said...

Don, great to hear from you.

And Tom, thanks for the clarification. As someone who has never seen the performances but who is currently writing about the book, I find myself asking these questions. It's a curious situation--performance pieces printed as a book. I think it works well on the page, by the way, and I wish I had access to the performative side of it, too. Anyway, Rodrigo's acknowledgment doesn't mention the role these people played in his work. And regardless, theater is community, too, at least that's the sense I get from Rodrigo's project.

Plastic said...

Reminds me of thinking about "bios" while putting together "Plastic Ocean". Alas, space & money made the decision for me, and I leaned toward MORE poetry opposed to Bios. But I wanted the bios in order to show that the group of writers I choose were from various backgrounds. Some published, some not; some herbalists who daydream in journals, some longtime urban historians with various degrees; etc., etc. I wanted to show there was no hierarchy used in choosing the work, but their connection to me, their inspiration in my life, their concern for the topic at hand, the clarity and/or intensity of the work. I also started getting bios with lists of "accomplishments", when really what I wanted in that regard was to give a shout out to their work, turn others on to it...so I went with a website acknowledgement instead; although unfortunately some of my Luddite contributors have none. Now I'm getting comments from folks like "I really enjoyed Frym's poem. Is she a poet?" or "David Meltzer? That name sounds so familiar." or "I never knew Chris Carlsson was a writer" (A published and widely distributed historian AND active in the bike activist community here...but the two don't always mingle in social situations!) Now it takes on meaning for me about the poem/piece having a life of it's own on the page, communicating it's style and message with humility and sincerity. Although on the other hand, I appreciate being turned on to an artist's previous work and that helps expand my own body of knowledge. Recently I published a few pieces in Fence, and I appreciated how they asked what I was currently reading for my bio. Since I consider most writers readers first, this was significant to who I am as a writer(although not necessarily to the published pieces since they were written several years back).

AnyWho! Onward thinker tinkerers...

marina.

Anonymous said...

Toscano's major.

(He's also a fabulous performer.)

Good stuff, Dale.

Kent

Joe Safdie said...

This post reminds me of an author's note that has always meant a great deal to me: here's part of it.

"Throughout this period I have published through persons, and except for two cases not represented here, not with houses. I have stayed with that care because it is accurate and important. Important equally for those who have published me. From near the beginning I have known my work to be theoretical in nature and poetic by virtue of its inherent tone. My true readers have known exactly what I have assumed. I am privileged to take this occasion to thank you for that exactitude, and to acknowledge the pleasure of such a relationship." (The Collected Poems, Edward Dorn, Four Seasons, 1975)

Interesting, though, to pay attention to the actual, material book of poems and its traditional parts . . . (and then, of course, to dream of subverting them . . . like, for example, including a list of blurbs almost as long as the poems themselves. Who would do that?)

Dale said...

Marina, Kent, Joe: thanks for these comments. Always good to hear from you all. That's a great distinction Dorn makes between persons and houses, Joe.... Dale